briefing -6-

posted 2009.06.05 at 00:05

Oof. This page totally talks to the audience:

< Greg> That wasn't a complete summary.
< Naomi> No shit. :P
<@West> [the rest of it]
<@West> I'M PAUL HARVEY, MOTHERFUCKERS! SEE HOW I MENTIONED DAD'S LOKI?!
< Greg> Yeah. Why'd you do that?
<@West> So Raven's comment a couple of pages back has some more context.
< Greg> o_o
< Naomi> ...
<@West> Dude, my dad buried an E-type freighter in solid bedrock up to the con tower. And then left to report in. PEOPLE NEED TO KNOW.
< Naomi> no, they don't.
<@West> ...

Something like that, anyway. I dunno. As usual, it's late and I'm not really awake!

All this damned exposition - I should, like, find an artist and a writer and put my name on a Daedalus series. Or something.

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HAH. I CAN do a complete page without smoking half a pack of cigarettes! AWESOME.

Maybe now that I have that much more time to throw at production, I can start bringing the non-shitty line art average up. :P

Three out of six ain't that bad, but 2/6 are total ass, as you can plainly see. The first shot of Naomi was the last to be inked, and consequently... well, let's just say the result speaks for itself.

I've been doing some thinking on how the rest of the chapter is going to flow, and how the rest of the story is going to flow- there'll definitely be some style changes at some point before Clarity is complete. I don't know exactly what's in store yet, but hey.... currently, any change is an improvement! :D