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posted 2009.04.05 at 22:14

Some scaling, mostly to the Grij and Alias panels to make room for the door sequence on the right. Those adjustments left me with either one hell of a cropping exercise, or an opportunity for a well-placed exterior shot.

Ph34r the space porn!

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20070722 : Scaled and tweaked. Rephrased the Captain's dialogue.

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While I'm basically happy with the way this page has turned out (the second non-fuzzy-dreamthing for chapter two), I wish I could say the same about my present state of mind. Weather, nutrition, other factors- I'm in a decidedly blah state with low batteries. Wearing shorts in coldass, wetass, clammyass weather likely isn't helping. o_O It's also the time of year where I'm not sweating my ass off anymore, so I'm drinking less water. :P

I've made some last-minute adjustments to parts of the page to clean up and emphasize lighting effects a bit, though this page will probably still look like poo on Windows monitors.

In any case.

The first section of chapter two is almost complete. Happily, I have a complete event outline for the second section, which now needs to be expanded into a script. Production on this will start when that part is complete, so there may well be a bit of a lull between the page after this one and the one that follows it.

Wheeha.