convergence -2-

posted 2009.01.24 at 19:45

More headspace for Raven in panel four, along with some basic cleanup and scrubbing. And continuity - pip! I'm pretty sure that's the last one I forgot. I hope. Also background tweaks and overall replacement, a la the previous page. The huge increase in headspace really works here - for once I had an overblown amount of dialogue that I was actually able to fit on the page.

First Edition Metadata

OPD : 2003.06.03 @ 23:26

20070722 : Scaled, bordered, and rewritten.

Edited 20050611 : Rewrote and tweaked several bits of dialogue. The result is a smoother flow and the elimination of a couple of (gaping) continuity errors that I've been lax in fixing. A little bit of nip-and-tuck, as at least one of these bits is a point in the Overplot, of which The Dualist is a subset.

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Yes, I know I spelled it wrong on the cover and on yesterday's page. Thanks to Engler and Allen for pointing it out.

For the quality, this page took WAY TOO LONG TO DO. I mean that. I suck some pretty serious wang at backgrounds- largely through not having access to a ruler when I was doing this and also largely through having created something like four, counting this one. That's going to change, obviously.

That aside, I managed to rid the page of a lot of the suck with some serious photoshop work and by adding a few lines of dialogue. Go me. All things considered, I'm fairly pleased with the turnout- cel on Raven looks better than yesterday, and my backgrounds can only get better.