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posted 2009.11.27 at 15:25

2008021 (26) - Shirts fixed. Panel one is the obvious super-crop client - might be able to nip and tuck the others if necessary.

20080923 - The best version of this would have involved new renders and some extensive work to raise the roof of panel two. Rather than go that route, I opted for second best - a tactical cropping of panel two. The gun blast is there, though the zing! is mostly cropped out. It works, and it puts a bit more emphasis on the crank zinging for Ornix's head.

20090910 (31) - Lettered.

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OPD : 2007.02.12 @ 06:25

This page took a hell of a lot longer than it should have - combine a late start (~2200) with a total lack of pep and what should have been a four or five hour job stretched out to around eight and change.

Of course, it's an action sequence. And we know how much experience I have with those.*

23:12 < solios> action scenes are Hard.
23:12 <@bda> Heh.
23:12 <@bda> You need to sell out.
23:12 < solios> no wonder most webcomics take place in coffee shops or equivalents.
23:12 < solios> yeah
23:12 < solios> actually, that's on the timetable.
23:12 < solios> I can do books 1-3** with my own ability and resources.
23:13 < solios> for book 4 to Not Suck will take either (a) me about six to ten years, or (b) a real comics production crew with me as writer and art director.
23:13 <@bda> :o
23:13 < solios> I tend to favor B. :P

* Almost none.

** As I've said elsewhere, The Dualist is Book 2. DCR will eventually be Book 1.