zoo -2-

posted 2009.05.02 at 20:15

I'd originally intended to have another exterior shot at the top, spreading the dialogue (between Greymalkin and Rayne) across both pages. But that didn't work very well - fortunately, moving the PA from the horrible in-panel effect of the previous version into black space has worked out nicely. I think this composition is in some ways stronger than the original version.

First Edition Metadata

OPD : 2004.03.17 @ 20:42

20070731 : Scaled and tweaked.

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One complete panel change, one panel split, three layout revisions and a total of eight progressional workfiles- merging finished panels until revision G, which was every panel but the middle right (which then proceeded to eat 30 layers). I'm not pleased with the way most of the linework turned out, but I am pleased with how I managed to wrestle it into working.

Hell of a dungeon crawl, but it's done! Yay!

Also. 73 pages in and ATC finally has an extra.